Feedback after rough cut

After my rough cut I decided to get some feedback, it's not every piece of feedback because most people said the same things,

1. "The start needs to be more clear that you have missed the bus, use more shots"

2. "some shots would look better if in time with the music."

3. "shots needs to be in time with the music, more"

4.  "I think the ending could of been better, maybe show a shot in the dark too highlight more that it's been through the whole day"
5. "I really like the individuality of the music video, it's different and exciting"

6. "some scenery shots, could look better, a sense of where you are when re-filming"

7. "Even tho you have a variety of shot's, I think more would be better, quicker pace"

8 . "Can here the sound's, of wind, birds etc, need to get rid of it"

9. "I really like the concept of the music video, a happy vibe"

10. " I really like the variety of shots although there was to many similar shots of the feet, really like the shot of the ending on the roof"

After looking over my feedback a lot of them, can be a simple fixes, especially after re-filming. The last comment made me make a decision, witch would be best for the ending, as someone said the ending should be in the dark, as if it's over the whole day, witch i have decided I'm going go with instead as the concept of my music video is the most important.